Tuesday, August 9, 2011

The Beautiful Stranger Poem? Good or Bad?

I thought it was really good except you use the words beautiful stranger too much. add something else in there. other than that i like it alot and i like all the smiles you used and verbs. great imagery. I also liked the whole idea of the poem and the ending where you asked, was it worth it. good job keep writing.

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